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My Dearest Husband:

How do you do it?

I don’t mean this vindictively, or snidely, or with anything other than amazement. I’m genuinely asking. I’m truly seeking answers.

How do you do it? How do you maintain the commas?

Because, for me? It’s all become hyphens. Mom-blogger, mom-helper, mom-cook, mom-runner. Even (good lord help us) mom-lover (“Okay, be in the moment, Rachel. Be in the moment. Was that a footstep? Oh, god, she’s awake. I knew that there was no way she’d go down so easily tonight! Not after all that ice cream before bed. You know, I really have to start making dinner earlier. At least for the girls. But, then, what, I’d have to have dinner ready by 5? Baths by 6? Jesus, how does anyone who works ever see their children? Well, I guess they don’t really. I mean, look at my hus– Oh! Dammit! Stay in the moment, Rachel!”)

Nothing can be separated out, you see? It’s all a big, tangled mess. But for you? You still have commas in your life.

Husband, lover, musician, engineer, mechanic. Fatherhood is just another facet. Another neat slice of your life pie-chart, contributing its portion to keep you complete. To bring you to fullness. To get you to 100%. It’s all still separate for you. Separate, but whole.

The other day, we talked about prioritizing. I complained that my running, my learning piano, my book clubs, my once-monthly girls’ nights felt inexcusably selfish. Unforgivably me-focused. But, at the same time, I couldn’t keep placing “me” at the bottom of my priority list. Especially since I so often feel as though I’m at the bottom of everyone else’s list too. That’s when I looked at you, and asked you about your priorities. Where was I? Where were the girls? Where were you? Your eyes flicked down and a small crease appeared between your eyebrows, and before you even answered, I knew.

You’ve never had to prioritize. You’ve never even thought about it.

Because you go to work, and you are a small business owner. A mechanic. A problem-solver. Then, you come home, and you can do some fun Dad stuff before Mommy declares that we need to brush our teeth and go to bed. And, sure, maybe you sit on the couch for a few minutes after the girls head upstairs, leaving Mom to take care of teeth, potty time, pull ups, and PJs all by herself, but, hey, you’ve worked hard today. You deserve a little break. (You do. You really do.) Afterwards, you snuggle in a king-sized bed with your wife, and rub your fingers along her thigh while you two watch House of Cards. Once again, though, she’s not in the mood. She just wants to sleep. But, overall, a day well spent.

Everything is still, remarkably, compartmentalized for you. Work, home, band practice, the occasional date night. It’s still hard. Very hard. We have a family business. You work 7 days a week. At least 70 hours. You wish you had more time for me. More time for the girls. More money for everything. I know that you worry that you’re missing out on your daughters’ childhood. It’s painful for all four of us when you say goodbye on Sunday mornings, especially when we know you won’t be back until after dinnertime. But, we’re trying to grow our business. That slice of the pie is just bigger right now. Soon, we’ll be able to cut some of it off, slivers at a time, until everything looks more balanced once again. Growth is hard. But we’ll get through it.

But me? I don’t have a pie in front of me. I have a plate of spaghetti. A jumbled, disorganized, hopelessly tangled mess. I have a mental inventory of every single item in our house stored away in the annals of my brain. I know where our four-year-old’s polka dot socks are, as well as your cordless drill. I know the exact placement of every single bouncy ball and crayon in our house, and if I was placed blindfolded in front of your closet, I would be able to put my hand within 3 inches of your favorite tie. I know what the thermostat is set to. I know how many ant traps we have out right now, as well as how old they are. I could tell you, with surprising accuracy, exactly how many chicken nuggets are in my refrigerator. I know that we have a play date scheduled in two hours, followed by naps, then perhaps a visit to Nana’s. I know that the insurance is due this week, and well-check appointments are next Thursday. I know that all of this information changes constantly because of the two small girls that I watch, protect, love, and occasionally resent every single day. I know that I missed recycling pick-up last week, so now I have to decide if we can make due for another week, or if I need to drag the girls to the recycling center and drop off our plastics in the meantime. I know that I need to start cooking more at home, because our credit card statement reads like a list of fast fooderies, and the workers at the local Chick-fil-A know my girls’ names now. But I know that cooking is the first thing to get thrown off my list at the end of a long day, and I know that it’s easy to call you and just ask for some fries instead.

I know that I’m so, so tired.

I know that you are too.

But you can at least find the small slice of “Bobbie” in your pie. It’s tiny, but it’s there. It plays music on Thursday nights. It builds guitars and spends I-don’t-know-how-many sleepless hours researching pickup combinations and guitar pedal wiring diagrams (you seriously have the most boring Google search history ever). It loves woodworking and landscaping, two places where it can show off its artistic side.

For me? It’s getting harder and harder to find that one “Rachel” noddle on my plate. Sure, I can go to book club, but I can only stay for an hour or so. My husband has to leave early for a meeting in the morning, so we’ll all get an early start tomorrow. I get to weave and create textiles on my loom, but I have kept only one or two pieces for myself. All the rest are gifts. I host play dates and drink buckets of coffee with my girlfriends. But we end up talking about the kids, being interrupted by the kids, cooking for the kids, kissing booboos on the kids. Once again, “we” are placed beneath (and outnumbered by) “them.” Even running, my one reprieve, is still tinged by my unrelentless momness. Running used to be my way to think. I would escape all of my worries, think about books, plot out the arguments for my dissertation, compose syllabuses and class plans. I never used to even listen to music while I ran. Now, I run to banish all of my thoughts. I run so I don’t have to think. I crank up the southern rock, and try to escape, well, me. I try to forget that I need to finish these five miles in under an hour, or else you’ll be late leaving for work. I try to forget that I’ve had to ask my mother-in-law to watch the girls–again–so that I can get in a run (and try to forget how much you hate that I have to lean on her so much). I try to forget that we’re almost out of milk. I try to forget the bills. The loneliness. The way that even this thing that I do, this completely solitary activity, is burdened by all of the other people and things in my life. The way that I carry my daughters, my mother-in-law, my friends, even your cordless drill around with me as I run.

Maybe your ability to compartmentalize is just another product of your male privilege. As a man, you’re not expected to be a “dad-entrepreneur.” You’re allowed to be a dad, and a businessman. In many ways, I am not afforded that same privilege.

But it often feels more sinister than that. My hyphenated state feels strongly self-imposed. A result of an overzealous rewrite of my own life, where I edited out all of my commas, one at a time. It felt inevitable at the time. It felt like it was the right thing to do after I became a mother. I should be able to delete the hyphens, organize the spaghetti, weave the noodles into a single tapestry (sort out my muddled analogies). I should be able to re-punctuate my life. But I still just don’t know how.

So, do you have any suggestions, dear husband? Can you help me? Or is your pie-chart, comma existence not really as great as it seems to me? Maybe you’re jealous of me? Maybe we both need to be our own messy, eternally divided selves in order for this to work? A part of me hopes that’s the case. The part that is tired. The part that just doesn’t want to keep searching for the unhyphenated, noodle “me.” But it wouldn’t be fair to you to stop looking for me. I cherish the small slice of “you” I get to taste every now and then. You deserve “me,” as well. Me in the moment. Me without the burdens. Me completely unattached to anything else.

Maybe together we can figure this out. You. And me.

Love always,


Nine months ago, I finished my PhD in Literature from Ball State University. It was a huge accomplishment, and “Dr” is now a title that I have the right to pretentiously carry around with me and impose upon others for life (I seriously have fantasies about correcting misogynistic mansplainers. “Listen, Miss, I think that I know exactly what I’m talking about–” “Actually, it’s Doctor. Dr. Baumgardner-Burke.” BOOM. Drop mic. Walk offstage.). Though I’m still having nightmares where my committee comes to my door and claims that my degree is invalid because I never finished my required Physics II course (please notice that my subconscious is a dick), as one of my good friends told me, “You DID this. It’s DONE. And they can never take it away from you.”

I did this.

It’s done.


Now what?

For nine months, I’ve grown increasingly anxious. Increasingly frustrated. Increasingly depressed. I finally get to be a fully dedicated stay-at-home mother, with little to no outside commitments to distract me from my family, from my two girls. I get to make crafts. I get to plan and execute elaborate birthday parties (the last two have been sick, trust me). I get to read books. Perfect my banana bread recipe. Take up running again. Play tea parties and picnics and princesses and dress up. I’ve done all of those. And it’s been fun. It really has.

And I think I hate it.

Now that I don’t have a dissertation to complete, I feel as though I’ve lost a sense of purpose. A sense of urgency. A sense of motivation. A sense of self.

I’ve started questioning my own value in my home.

“I could weave something today, but if I don’t, nobody’s going to care, because nobody’s waiting for one of my blankets.”

“I should clean out and organize my desk and paperwork. But what’s the point? I’m not writing a syllabus anytime soon.”

“I can try out this new recipe. But the girls just want to eat Happy Meals anyway. I guess I could use a burger, too.”

And, worst of all: “What’s the point of writing? I could publish something for a dozen people online, or I could just stop. The only people who might notice are my father and my sixth grade teacher.”

My novel, my memoir, my blog, my short story collection. It wasn’t that I was too busy or otherwise occupied to write them these past months. Instead, I convinced myself that they were just never going to be written. That they were nothing but the lucid hallucinations of a lazy daydreamer. These past nine months, I have written less on my creative projects than I ever did while I was writing my dissertation. Back then, the rigors of a schedule, of needing to make progress leeched into other areas of my life. Though I felt guilty taking time away from my studies, I still usually found an hour or two every week to work on my blog, to weave, to have coffee or wine with friends. Not only was I better at scheduling such “luxuries” when I had the pressure of my deadlines beating down on me, but I also felt more deserving of such breaks from mothering and researching.

Now, working towards nothing, I feel worthy of nothing.

A few weeks ago, I hit my lowest point. For two days, I did nothing. Nothing. I woke up the girls, got them dressed (eventually), poured us all bowls of cereal, then I turned on the television. One day, we watched 9 episodes of My Little Pony and two movies. They paced in laps around the play room. I played sudoku on my tablet. We kept the door to the outside locked.

I cried when I realized what I had done to them.

Back when I first became pregnant, I predicted that being a mother would certainly be rewarding, but not entirely fulfilling for me. I like organization. I like structure. I like having a schedule. I love the feeling of crossing off things on my to do list. I’ve always found that I’ve accomplished more when my time is constricted by schedules, by conflicts, by the delicate balance between necessity and pleasure. I’m worried that this early prediction is really coming true. My dissertation wasn’t a job in the strictest sense of the word. I wasn’t being paid (I was paying them after all!). It was solitary, isolating even, and I would go months without having a meaningful conversation about my research with another adult. But it was work. There was visible progress. There was a goal. Yes, I complained and stressed and worried endlessly about the nightmare of planning and scheduling, but I had something to schedule.

It took a long time to figure out what has been missing for me, but I think I recognize now what I need to do. I don’t know yet if I’m going to look for an actual job, but I am actively searching for some form of employment. Maybe volunteering more at my girls’ school. Helping out a friend with a business website. Becoming more active in the family business. Organizing a crafting collective for my mom’s group. Something. Something to give me drive and purpose. To anchor me again. To fix what has broken in me.

I think I need to be a working mom.

I need to work again.

Because nothing works now.

I need me to work again.

A working mom.

A Mom. Working.

I suppose that my parenting style could be best described as “Rip it off like a Band-Aid.” I’m not one for long transitions. A week before Honest Baby’s first birthday, I decided to start weaning her straight from breastmilk to a sippy cup. For six weeks, this method seemed to be working pretty well. I had gotten her down to just nursing before naps and bedtime. Then, the poor thing came down with a double ear infection. She was miserable, and I couldn’t deny her when she wanted to nurse around the clock. The timing was terrible. We were in day 3 of potty training her older sister, and I suddenly had to be both physically attached to my infant while sitting with my toddler in the bathroom, celebrating every single drop that landed in the toilet. Honest Girl would end the days, exhausted from learning this new life skill, and flop into bed, while Honest Baby, nose dripping, head pounding, and ears hurting, would want to nurse to sleep, then would wake up several times at night to be comforted again. My breasts were becoming full again. I had to pull out my D-cup nursing bras.

One day, she nursed 15 times. Seven times right in a row. I was trapped on the couch for two hours. I had to ask Honest Husband to help feed me dinner because I couldn’t move.

The last time, right before bed, she didn’t even suckle. I watched as she chewed—literally, chewed—my nipple. I became angry, broke her latch, and said aloud, “That’s it! I’m done. You don’t need this, and I don’t need this. You’re finished, kid.”

And that’s how I stopped breastfeeding my last child.

I had to stop breastfeeding Honest Girl cold-turkey when she was nine months old. I had come down with a horrible UTI that had landed me in the ER at midnight. I had gone from fine to pissing blood within the span of an hour, and had to be placed on a strong antibiotic. When the lab work came back, it was discovered that I had caught a drug-resistant bacteria, and I was put on two more antibiotics simultaneously.

“Can I still breastfeed my daughter?” I asked the nurse over the phone as she told me the news.

There was a long pause. “Technically, yes. But essentially she’s going to be getting these antibiotics, too. The doctor knows that you’re breastfeeding, so he prescribed ones that can be used while you nurse. But, honestly? If it was me? I wouldn’t.”

So, I stopped. It was a surprisingly easy transition. The antibiotics made my supply disappear almost instantly, and Honest Girl was already taking bottles at daycare. We just switched her bottles over to formula, and Honest Husband took over bedtimes. After three days of being cranky, she had moved on. I was freed from being attached to my child, and I had a “good” reason, the “right” kind of excuse, to tell the hardcore breastfeeding advocates in my life why I just didn’t make it through the full first year. I was unconcerned.

Besides, I knew that I’d have another child.

And I didn’t want to wait any longer.

Almost instantly, I got my first period.

And six weeks later, I was pregnant with Honest Baby.

For 13 months, I breastfed full time. She’s never had formula. I bought two containers of it, for a “just in case” supply, and when she turned 11 months, I gave the formula to my neighbor (the same one who also received my donated milk), unopened.

In that time, I also donated thousands of ounces of breastmilk. Three babies ended up using my donated milk. My neighbor’s, and two small children at my kids’ daycare who had some terrible digestive issues. My milk was the only thing they could eat without throwing up.

I stopped pumping a week before I started to wean Honest Baby. When my neighbor stopped by to pick up the last of my frozen supply, I apologized for not having very much on hand. “Hold on, Rachel. Hold on.” She counted what was there. It was over 100 ounces.

When I look at these numbers, when I think about what my body has produced, about the life it has sustained (and maybe even made better), I am content. I worked hard. I gave my time, my body, my needs to these small, burgeoning human beings. I lost sleep. I lost inches. I lost the wonderful sensitivity of my nipples. I lost my sex drive. Hell, I even lost my periods. I gave it all to them.

And I want it all back.

I really do.

I was ready to be done.

Done, done.

So why does this hurt so much?

Why, during those first two days after cutting off Honest Baby, did I physically ache—not just in my full, heavy breasts, but all down my sternum and into the pit of my stomach—to nurse her just one more time?

Why did I have to clench my fists in order to keep my arms from reaching out, from cradling her, and giving her exactly what we both wanted more than anything else in the world?

Why did I weep when I sent my husband to her at three in the morning, sad and jealous that it wasn’t me?

Why does it sometimes feel as though someone has taken a giant ice cream scoop and hollowed me out from shoulders to hips, leaving behind a gaping cavity?

Last night, when my husband put Honest Baby to bed, I started to cry. Over the monitor, I heard him read her a story, then rock her, making up lyrics to Brahm’s Lullaby. Softly, he placed her in her crib, put her favorite lovie close by, whispered, “I love you,” and walked out the door. She rolled over, and promptly fell asleep.

For 13 months, I could never get her to quietly go to sleep. I would nurse her until she would sweetly snore in my arms. Then I’d break her latch, and put her down.

And she would cry the second I closed the door behind me.

When my husband came downstairs, I sobbed, “I’ve been making her miserable for a whole year. I make her miserable!”

He held me. “She’s just ready now. She wasn’t ready before. You’re both ready now.”

It’s true. I am ready.

But I’m not.

This morning, a week after I finally pulled away from my baby and cut her off from my breast, I squealed with delight upon seeing my now-empty breasts in the mirror in the morning. I came rushing out of the bathroom, flashing Honest Husband.

“Look at my boobies! They’re so little and cute! And so soft!”

He looked up and smiled. “You look like you again.”

I’m feeling more like me again.

But also not.

Because “me” is now also a mother who holds her child in her arms and offers the sweet, sticky milk that her body has produced, that her body wants to give, to pour into her baby.

“Me” is now a woman with an emptiness where there once was fullness.

“Me” now has nothing—idle parts—where there once was life.

“Me” is still working on being okay with that.

I do love my new, small breasts. I love the softness. The sag. The way that the skin falls down, relaxed. I even love the darkness of my nipples. Signs of the beautiful, strange, powerful elixir they once contained, and the sweet, toothless mouths that once sought them.

I love that Honest Baby is falling in love with her daddy in a whole new way.

I love that I now get to have bedtime with my smart, funny minx of a toddler while my husband rocks our baby in the next room.

I love that my baby is growing into an independent child.

I love that I’m able to try to become me again.

I love that I still have that opportunity.

But, yes, I’m still crying.

Being a parent is sometimes like being a recovering addict. I’d give anything to have just one more time. Just once more with breastfeeding. Just once more to see that second blue line appear on a pregnancy test. Just once more to feel that first kick from the baby growing inside of me. Just once more to watch a child that is loved and wanted emerge, like a gooey miracle, from the deepest part of me. Just once more. Just once.

But, sometimes, you have to stop. You have to decide that this will be the last time. It has to end.

An end.

It’s the only way to make a beginning.

Today, I feel like I need a good cry.

Nothing in particular is wrong. Sometimes, I just get too many feelings at once. It gets overwhelming. So I just crank a quarter turn on my emotional release valve. And let go.

This last weekend was Fourth of July. On Thursday, friends came over for a visit, and we had a wonderful dinner of Indian food, where we talked about family, jobs, children, and the future (she’s seven months pregnant with their first). We let Honest Girl run all over the empty patio, watching the trucks drive by on the road, and laughed while Honest Baby ate her body weight in saag paneer, smearing it into her hair and clothes with joyous abandon.

I was overwhelmed with friendship.

This weekend, my family and I went to a party to watch fireworks. Honest Husband played lead guitar in a band, and sang for the entire crowd. Honest Girl ran to her cousin, held hands with her Uncle, drank “yemmonnade” (lemonade), and squealed in delight when the fireworks lit up the sky. She pointed to airplanes and helicopters, explaining to me that she and her cousin will fly “up in the sky” one day. She danced to her father’s music, and strummed his guitar after he finished singing a song just for her. Meanwhile, Honest Baby smiled and clapped. She let everyone hold her. She never cried or fussed, and her open, trusting face and easy smile made all the older girls fall in love with her. They carried her around the party, cooed as she crawled and toddled around, holding on to one finger, and laughed while they watched her bounce up and down to the rhythm of the music. Then, she watched the first ten minutes of the fireworks, and fell asleep in my arms.

I was overwhelmed with pride.

This weekend, Honest Husband entertained all of us at the party on Saturday, playing requests that his tipsy relatives called out until midnight. I don’t know if he even managed to eat any dinner. Then, after getting home around 2am on Saturday morning, he woke up on Sunday, took all of his girls to breakfast, and began working on our kitchen countertops. He laminated all of our countertops, and finished the edging on them, even though he was exhausted. And he kept going, even after he cut himself badly on a belt sander (and bled on the counters and garage floor). But he kept going, even in the high heat and humidity. He finished all of the gluing and prepping, just so that he could install countertops (and a stove and sink) later this week. For me. For us. For our girls.

And I’m overwhelmed with love.

Then, last week, I heard that K, the woman at my daughters’ daycare who adopted her heroin-addicted cousin’s child, was in danger of losing her little girl. The girl’s biological grandparents, five months after K took her in, are challenging her adoption. Now that K has nursed her, loved her, cared for her, brought her back from the brink of hopelessness, they want to take her away. Now that K’s son (a boy with kind, sleepy eyes in Honest Girl’s class) has started kissing this girl, calling her “sister,” they want her removed from K’s home. Today K goes to court, to fight for her family. When she took that little girl in, the girl was diagnosed as “Failure to Thrive.” Last week, at her six-month appointment, she was up into the 50th percentile. She’s growing. She’s eating solid foods. Her face has become round and her eyes clear. She no longer suffers from the sharp, wrenching gut pains that are associated with children born with opiate addictions. Because of K.

And today, K may lose her.

A mother may lose her child.

And I’m overwhelmed.

So, please, if you see me today, and my eyes are red, don’t worry too much about me. Just send me a kind smile. An understanding smile.

I’ll be sure to give one back.

Because it’ll be a good cry.


I don’t ask for it often, but please pray for K. She is facing a mother’s greatest nightmare: losing her child. Biological or not, this little girl is hers. Pray for them. I know that it will mean a lot to K.


Addendum (7/8/2014): I spoke with K yesterday when I went to pick up my girls at their daycare. She officially lost all custody rights, and her adoption was halted. Her little girl is being “transitioned” to her biological grandparents’ home over the next two weeks. In order to fight the order, K would have to spend thousands of dollars in legal fees that she and her husband just don’t have, with very little hope of ever winning.

They have lost their little girl. Their daughter. She looked tired, but said, “She’ll be with family now.”

We both knew how wrong it felt to say those words.

She didn’t cry.

I did.

This is not what American family courts were designed for. It can’t be. It just can’t.

Thank you all for your prayers and positive thoughts. Even if they didn’t provide the outcome we all wanted, I’m sure that K felt them, and was comforted.


Growing up in Northern Michigan, with Lake Huron visible through my bedroom window, I’ve watched the slow suddenness of dawn breaking over the lake.  At first, the dark appears impenetrable.  On nights without a moon, the dim starlight barely illuminates the outline of the roof, the house, the tall oak and maple trees that surround me.  I would sit and try to focus on the dark shapes, willing them into clarity.  Slowly, the trees become more familiar.  There’s the slope of the hill where we go sledding every winter.  And the gentle pitch of the roof under my window.  If I try very hard, I can direct my gaze out, looking between the trees, down to the lake, only recognizable as a black smudge—a large nothing that lets me know the forest has ended and the water begun.  For a long, long time, I focus on trying to distinguish shapes, one from the other.  Though I fight the urge, I still find myself looking frequently at the clock next to my bed.  Even as the minutes steadily tick by, I can’t believe that the dark remains this persistent.  Shouldn’t it be dawn by now?  I wait and watch.   Perhaps I hear the click of dry branches and leaves.  An animal is close by.  I try to decide if the sharp snap was just the magnified sound of a twig breaking underneath a possum, or the efficient cut of a deer’s hoof on a branch.  I look down at the backyard, thinking I should be able to see, amazed by my own blindness.  Awed with the potency of the night.  I am repeatedly surprised by the failure of my eyes to penetrate.

Then, without warning or anticipation, it is morning.

I look across to the black nothing, and clearly see the grey line of the lakeshore.  The shingles on the roof become distinguishable, visible.  I see a rabbit, nibbling on a fallen apple in the backyard.  The blue morning has come.  Night is over.  With a finality and a suddenness that I was never able to predict, it’s over.  The night held on with tenacity, but then quickly submitted to the light.

The day has begun.

It was our last test.

Maddie had already started gaining weight again (she took to breastfeeding immediately, and wanted to nurse constantly, making up for the first four days of her life when she subsisted on intravenous fluids and milk dripped into her stomach through a feeding tube).  She was growing.  Her nasal cannula had been removed.  Her oxygen levels were steady, never dropping below 98, even in the deepest sleep.  She wasn’t on any medications.  There was no sign of infection in her lungs.  She was still jaundiced, but there were signs that her bilirubin levels had already peaked.  She slept on a biliblanket, but that was something that we would be prescribed by our local pediatrician.  My husband and I had dutifully attended the newborn safety class that was required of all parents before leaving the NICU with their children.  Our bags were packed.  We were ready to go.

There was just one more test to pass before we could be discharged.

Maddie's biliblanket gave her a blue glow down her back.

Maddie’s biliblanket gave her a blue glow down her back.

Children in the NICU, especially children who had been admitted with respiratory distress, had to pass the “car seat test.”  Maddie would have to be strapped into her car seat for two hours, her vitals monitored regularly, to ensure that she could tolerate the pressure sitting up would place on her chest and lungs.

The night nurse decided to run the test from midnight to 2am.  My husband and I carefully lifted Maddie, with all of her wires and monitors, out of her warming table, and put her in the car seat that we had propped up on towels on the hospital floor.  I laughingly apologized for the blueberry stains on the cover.  The seat had just recently belonged to her big sister, who loves to eat blueberries on the drive home from daycare.  I was planning to wash it before Maddie came, but the unexpectedness of her delivery meant that the seat was still dirty.  Cheerios fell out of it as my husband lowered the straps down to the newborn setting.  The tiny messes from the car seat were reminders of home, of our older daughter, who was a big sister without realizing it.  My husband and I left a Cheerio on the floor, somehow liking the way the small, childlike mess looked in the sterile room.  We tightened the straps down, smiled and cooed at Maddie, and the nurse started the timer.  Two hours.  If her vitals remained stable, then we were cleared to be discharged the next morning. If not, we had the option of running the test again, but we had to wait several hours in between.  We were prepared to stay up all night.  We were prepared to do anything.

Home.  Home.  Home.

It ran through our heads, consumed our thoughts.  “C’mon, Maddie.  Just do this, and we get to go home!  Don’t you want to go home?”  We do.  We all want to go home.  You’ve never been home, but trust me, it’s wonderful.  Come on, Maddie.  You can do it, Maddie.

But, placed in the new and uncomfortable position, Maddie began to panic.  She screamed.  Her heart raced.  Her breathing rate leaped back up to the frightening numbers we saw on the first day.  100.   95.  98.  101.  89.

We weren’t allowed to stop the test once it had commenced.  Weren’t allowed to take her out of her seat, even for a minute, and the nurse told us that if her vitals remained elevated like this, she wouldn’t be able to pass us.  She wouldn’t be able to send us home.

I held Maddie’s hand.  I stroked her face.  My husband spoke low, calming words to her.  It was the same low, calm voice that carried me through the pain of preterm labor, and my first delivery.  Her legs kicked off her blankets.  We replaced them, tucking them around her so she felt snug, safe, being careful to not jostle her, to not disturb the monitors and send her vitals on even greater spikes.  The nurse saw our desperation.  Please, Maddie.  Please.  Just relax.  Just nap.  If you sleep for the next two hours, you get to go home forever.  Please.  She tried to time it so that she came and recorded Maddie’s vitals during moments when she was relatively calm.  Maddie’s tiny, sharp, papery nails gripped me, leaving small, crescent moon indentations in the flesh on my fingers.  She was red, staring at me, willing me to pick her up and cuddle her.  I started to bite my upper lip, focusing my sight on a spot somewhere underneath the rolling table full of newborn diapers.  My husband, always keeping an eye on me, saw me tense up.  “It’ll be okay, baby.  They’ll let us go.  There’s no reason to keep us any longer.”

I shook my head, still sucking on my lip.  If you just looked at Maddie’s numbers at this moment, they weren’t good.  Taken out of context, the numbers made it seems as though Maddie was still sick.  I was mad at the test.  How else could she respond?  She went from a tall, warm table from which she could see her parents’ faces and all of the activity of the hallway, to a stiff, low chair on the cool floor, able to look at nothing but the underside of medical equipment.  No soothing movement or rocking.  No music or conversation.  No cars or scenery whizzing by her window.  I was mad.  Mad that this was the silly, small thing that could keep us here, trapped.  I was mad that I couldn’t hold my baby.  Mad that I had to subject her to this.  Mad that she was strapped down, tight, with wires fished through her clothes and pressed against her soft, thin skin.  We’re going to have to stay.  We’ll never get out of here.  It’ll never happen.  We’ll have to stay here.  Forever.

“Somebody else is going to need this bed way more than we do.  They’re not going to make us stay because of this.  She’s a baby.  They understand that babies cry.”

I glanced occasionally at the clock, amazed by how quickly the two hours passed.  Maddie dozed for about 20 minutes the entire time, worn out by her own screams.  The nurse took the opportunity to quickly record her vitals repeatedly during that time, hoping, I assume, that the lower numbers would drive her overall averages down.  My husband and I never moved.  When the two hours were over, we stood up with creaking bones and numb feet.  I had been leaning on my left hand, and had to convince my fingers to stretch, to move out of the claw they had formed.  We unlatched Maddie quickly, and I nursed her to sleep.  It was 2:30 in the morning.

“She passed.”

The nursed smiled at my look of disbelief.  My husband squeezed my shoulder.  She passed.  The final test.  She passed.

It was over.

We were going home.

After Maddie and my husband were both asleep, I used the excuse of getting a glass of water to wander, once more, around the NICU floor.  It was the middle of the night.  The lights were dimmed in all of the rooms.  The few rooms that housed parents had curtains pulled across the fold-out beds in the back.  The incubators covered with bright, patterned blankets and the curtains thrown over the cots made for strange, mirror images in the rooms.  It’s a Mommy Bed and a Baby Bed!  One big.  One little.  For some reason, I found this thought hilarious.  A loud, inappropriate, bark of a laugh escaped my lips.  The nurses at the closest station looked up at me, and I sheepishly smiled as I hurriedly walked by.  I filled my water bottle in the lunch room, half hoping, half dreading the thought of running into Maria or one of the other parents.  But I saw no one.

It was 3 o’clock in the morning.

I smiled the entire way back to the room.

The next day, my husband, Maddie, and I walked through the front door just as our oldest daughter was finishing up her lunch.  A bouquet of flowers filled our kitchen table, and my parents stood, smiling, ready to greet us. My oldest daughter immediately kissed her little sister.  Though only 18 months old, it was clear that she knew, somehow, that this new, small, still very orange person was going to be someone she would love, protect, fight with and for forever.  I couldn’t stop touching my girls, my babies, my husband, my family.  I held everyone in the house, for as long as they’d let me.  There wasn’t a moment, a second, that day that I wasn’t touching one of them, feeling them, there, physical and present.  And all mine.


Once she was in the car, listening to the Black Crowes, Maddie calmed down and fell asleep.

It wasn’t until the next day, at Maddie’s follow-up appointment with our pediatrician that I finally broke down.  We were given a biliblanket for her jaundice and told to keep her on it for a few days.  But other than that?  “She’s perfect.  She doesn’t need anything else.  Take her home and enjoy her.”



“No medicine?  No more follow-ups?”

“Nope.  Her next appointment will be her regular two-week check up.  She’s just a normal newborn now.”

Normal. Normal.  Never before had I appreciated the gift, the joy of normal.

Normal.  It echoed inside of me, bounding off the walls of the strength I’d been trying desperately to show for the last week, and broke them down.  The avalanche started.

I cried.

I wept.

I sobbed.

I put my face in Maddie’s warm neck and cried until she was wet with my tears.


It’s over.

Without even looking for it, it happened.

The day had begun.

Big Sister immediately kissed her sissy.

Big Sister immediately kissed her sissy.


The stars in Northern Michigan aren’t like the stars anywhere else.  Growing up in a village, 100 miles away from the nearest mall, three miles from the only stoplight in the county, and 25 miles from the 45th parallel (halfway between the equator and the North Pole), the stars were some of my closest neighbors.  My family and I watched comets, meteor showers, lunar eclipses, found Mars and Jupiter, distinguished the pinkish cast of red giants and the sharp blue of white dwarfs, all from the vantage point of our front yard.  Every winter, at least once, we sat in awe, observing the beautiful dance of the Aurora Borealis.  My father would point out the sweeping band of the Milky Way, running East to West across our front yard.  We’d spread blankets on the hard, uneven ground, and gaze at the sky, every now and then flipping the blanket up to search for a rogue acorn that was digging into our backs.  While looking up at the stars, trying to not complain of the cold, even while my pinkie fingers turned numb, we would play with our flashlights, holding them above our heads and shining them up into the darkness, watching the beam for as long as we could until it vanished, out of our reach.

“That light will go on forever.”

My father was always fascinated with astronomy.  Physics combined with beauty, and a touch of the Almighty.  It was poetry for him.  He would tell us that the beams of our flashlights, the light from them, traveled out and away from us at incredible speeds.  The light was already above the Earth, past the Moon.  The light was out in dark, deep space even before we had picked up our blankets, given in to the cold, and trudged back to the warm, yellow lights of the house.  The light was traveling through the vast spaces, bringing at least a temporary something to the nothing that surrounded the stars.

He made me believe that, if I tried hard enough, focused clearly enough, and felt strongly enough, that my small flashlight could produce a beam of light that could travel for millions of years.  Through the cosmos, past galaxies and black holes and super novae.  I liked to think about my light, bringing an intangible something to the unimaginable nothing.  It wasn’t big or strong enough to erase the darkness, but it was enough to forever alter it.  My light could travel long after I was gone, and one day become as ancient as the stars themselves, stars that, already dead, were still shining brilliantly above me, marking this place, this spot on an old quilt on my front yard, as home.  Forever and always, somewhere, my small beam of light was reaching out, farther and farther, shining as a reminder of my having been here, on the almost-frozen ground, looking up.   Looking for a beam of light.

And maybe, just maybe, through the unlikely mathematics of nearly-impossible odds, my tiny beam of light could reach a far-distant stargazer, curled up on an old quilt in her front yard, her father and siblings by her side, also straining her eyes.  Also trying to fight against the dark of night.  Also waiting, impatiently, to see clearly again.

Also looking for the light.

Though it is small, I wanted this series to be a beam of light for others trapped in the dark.  Maria, this series is for you.  A good mother.  I hope, every day, that your dawn has broken.

A Good Day

I watch our nurse, Brenda, taking Maddie’s measurements.  She weighs her (still losing weight), checks her length (surprisingly long for her gestational age), and measures the circumference of her head (50th percentile.  Perfect).  It’s been long enough that I feel more comfortable asking questions.

“What does the head measurement tell you?  I don’t even actually know why you do that.  To make sure she’s normal?”

The nurse smiles, “No, not really.  There’s a big range of ‘normal’ when it comes to babies.  Measuring the head lets us know if her brain is growing.  We compare the size of her head from two days ago to today.  There’s an expected percentage of growth that we’re looking for.”

“And if it doesn’t grow?”

Brenda sighs, “It could mean a lot of things.  A birth defect.  A neurological problem.  Or that there’s just,” I was starting to get good at seeing when the nurses struggled for words, when they tried to soften what they were saying to the frazzled parents around them.  “Just, not as much brain activity as we want to see.  We want to see everything growing.  Especially in preemies.”

I nod.  I’m looking down at Maddie, squinting at me over the tube that’s covering the bottom half of her face.

Brenda sees my look.  She winks, “It’s growing.  Don’t worry.  She’s doing great.  She’s perfect.”

I chuckle, “Except for those lungs!”

“We’ll get those.  Don’t you worry.”

The NICU, Day 4.  Wednesday.

I woke up around 7am.  Woke up? Perhaps that’s too definite.  I shifted from one state of semi-consciousness to another. The niggling pain in my back told me that I had been on the armchair in Maddie’s room for far too long, giving me a sense that it was now morning, even though I couldn’t see any trace of daylight in the carefully-lit NICU.  While fumbling around in my suitcase (it was still the suitcase that I had packed for what I thought would be my four-day hospital stay after my C-section.  Mostly contained robes, yoga pants, empire-waist dresses, and a few soft nursing bras.  No real outfits. Nothing appropriate for meetings with doctors, or for camping out on an uncomfortable recliner in an aggressively air-conditioned ward) I stumbled across a rare gift.  A clean pair of socks. Still folded in a little ball.  I gave a small cry of delight when I saw them.  I actually hugged them close to my chest.  I had packed this bag expecting to wear hospital-issued compression socks in a maternity ward just an eight minute drive from my house.  I didn’t even remember throwing in a clean pair of socks.  After four days in the same pair of socks, the small, while ball of clean laundry looked like a gift from the Almighty.  I smiled at my husband, and waved the socks in his direction.

“Today’s going to be a good day.”

He stuck his lower lip out in a pout, “I’m so jealous.  I want clean socks.”

“Hey, at least you have clean underwear.”

“You’re still wearing those enormous maxi pads.  It doesn’t even matter for you.”

“And that thought is the only thing getting me through the day, trust me.”

He stretched.  He was sleeping on the small fold-out couch in Maddie’s room.  His feet hung over the edge of the bed all night, and I could tell by the way that he groaned as he got up that his back wasn’t doing any better than mine.  “Think I’m going to hit up the shower.”

I jumped, “No.  No, let me.  Let me go first.  I haven’t had a shower since I left the hospital.”

He smiled.  That smile.  His smile.  The smile that can make me lose track of how many toes I have, or whether or not I’ve eaten today.  The smile that derails me, unmans me, in the best possible way. “Sure, baby.  You go first.”

“If I miss rounds—“

“I’ll let you know what the doctors say.”

I took a forty-five minute long shower.  I stood in the small, tiled stall, and just let the water run over my body.  I played with the knobs.  First scalding hot.  Then goose-pimply cold.  Maddie’s nurse, Brenda, upon hearing that my husband and I had neglected to pack any toiletries, had managed to sneak in two small, travel-sized bottles of shampoo and conditioner.  Real conditioner.  Not the off-brand two-in-one that the NICU provided.  But a real, dedicated conditioner.  I used almost the whole bottle, combing through my hair with my fingers until it lay, perfectly smooth, plastered against my head and neck, and the water fell away from it in one sheet.  I ran my hands along its smoothness over and over again.  At one point, I heard a knock on the door.  I immediately thought that it must be Maria (there are so few other parents here, who else could possibly need the shower?).  I almost got out.  Almost yelled that I’d just be another minute.  But then I didn’t.  I pretended that I didn’t hear.  There’s only one shower in this wing, but I decided that it was all mine that morning.  All mine.

I took another half hour after my shower to dry my hair and style it.  I even put on a little makeup before I got dressed.  I didn’t have any clean pants or underwear, but I had that fresh, small ball of socks.  I pulled them on, being careful to avoid the damp puddles on the floor where I had stood.  When I slid my sneakers on, I sighed from the delight, the joy, of the soft, clean socks.

“Today is going to be a good day.”

I got back to Maddie’s room to find my husband.  He smiled, surveying me. “You look normal.”

We both knew, especially in this place, it was the ultimate compliment.

I had missed rounds, but my husband reported good news.  Maddie’s lungs were open enough, and her breathing was stable enough that they were going to take her off her ventotherm today.  Instead of a large tube taped over her mouth and across her cheeks, she was going to be placed on a small, nasal cannula.  We’d be able to hold her today.  For as long as we wanted.  And, even better than that, I would be able to try breastfeeding her for the first time.  I laughed and bounced up and down.  My husband smiled and left to take his shower.  I stood at Maddie’s warming table and chatted with her until he came back.

After the respiratory therapist (a small, pretty blonde who looked far too young to be as sure and competent as she was) had wheeled the ventotherm out of the room, Brenda came in and told me it was time to try breastfeeding.  I could see her choosing her words carefully, preparing me for failure.  Maddie’s never breastfed before.  She’s only been fed via IV and then feeding tube.  She’s never even swallowed before.  She’s never been held, skin-to-skin.  Never suckled.  She’s a newborn, and all of her energy has been focused on just breathing up to this point.  She might not have the energy, the musculature, the ability to latch.  It might take awhile.  It might never take at all.  I had to be prepared for all of that.

I nodded as I took off my shirt and put on my robe.  I tried to look serious and somber.  But I looked down at Maddie’s face, at her dark, dark blue eyes.  Almost purple.  Almost violet.  Almost grey eyes.  She looked back at me.  I saw the strength in her eyes, the determined little frown that crossed her forehead.  Both of her cheeks had been rubbed raw by the tape holding her ventotherm on, and her lips were swollen from having been pursed around it for four days.  She looked like she had gone through a fight.  And her eyes told me she was ready for more.  I nodded resolutely at Brenda, then smiled a smile just for Maddie. We’ve got this, little girl.

I sat in the armchair, surrounded by pillows, and offered Maddie my nipple for the first time.

She latched immediately, and tried a few, tentative sucks.  Her eyes rolled back in her head, and she took long, slow, deep swallows for five whole minutes until she fell off, exhausted and barely conscious.

I couldn’t stop laughing.  I finally felt like Maddie’s mother.  I finally felt it.


Today is a good day.


Later, the neonatologist came into Maddie’s room.  I was surprised to see her.  She usually checked in during rounds, then didn’t come again unless something was needed or if there was a problem.  I was feeding Maddie again while my husband was getting us dinner.

She held up her hands, “Oh! I’m sorry to intrude.  Please, don’t stop.  I have a meeting across the hall in a few minutes, and I just thought I’d drop in.  I just wanted to see how everything was.”

I was too proud of my girl to be embarrassed.  “That’s okay.  Everything’s great.  She’s latching like a champ.  Even better than her big sister was at this age.”

We chatted about breastfeeding, and those first, difficult weeks, trying to learn about our selves, our bodies, and our babies all at once.

The neonatologist paused, and cocked her head to look more closely at Maddie, snuggled in my arms.  “You know, I love coming to this room.  Because every day is good news.  Every day is progress.  This is my favorite room.”

I smiled, holding those words down inside of me.  Letting them warm every part.

“What would you think about taking her home soon?  Like Friday?”  She had shifted her smile from Maddie to me.

My breath caught in my throat.  Home.  Home.  Home, home, home.  Yes, home.  Yes.  “Really?  Really?  Oh, my God.  That soon?”

“She’s doing great.  No promises, but she’s doing really great.  She’s pretty perfect.”

Today is a good day.

The neonatologist dimmed the lights for me as she left, and I wrapped Maddie up inside my robe, our two bodies hot and snug together.  I put my face in Maddie’s hair.  Funny.  Even after four days in a hospital, getting nothing but sponge baths, Maddie still had that incredible, newborn smell.  The smell of a brand new person.  Of a brand new soul.  I wanted to sit there and smell her forever.


Brenda was across the hall with the neonatologist and another doctor I didn’t recognize.

“. . . No, no change.”

“What was her gestational age?”

“30 weeks.”

They’re talking about that little girl.  The one across the hall.  I focus on the top of Maddie’s head.  I hear a sigh.

“So it’s been a week since her last change in head circumference?”

I hear Brenda click a few buttons on the laptop she brings with her everywhere.  “Yeah.  Well, six days.”

The other doctor speaks up, “I’d like to order an MRI to test for brain activity.”

I still don’t look up, but I know that the neonatologist is nodding.  The room is somber.  They ask about the little girl’s responses.  Brenda will have to retest her hearing and vision.  I hear the words “macular degeneration?”  Asked, like a question.  There seems to be no change.  No improvement.  No progress.  They can’t promise anything.

When the doctors leave, I look up and into the girl’s room.  Brenda is performing her “care.”  I glance quickly at the little girl.  I know she’s a girl because she wears a tiny, pink cap over her head.  She’s so small.  She doesn’t move when Brenda wipes out her mouth, changes her diaper.

She looks like a movie prop.  Like a doll, but less real.

I scan the room.  It’s empty.  Neat.  Perfectly clean and organized.  I see a package on the small table next to the untouched fold-out bed.  I recognize the package from the Riley welcoming staff.  It’s a knit blanket.  They brought Maddie one two days ago.  I have it draped across the arm of the recliner.  It’s soft and warm.  Pale, neutral pastel colors.  Across the hall, the little girl’s blanket is untouched, tied with a string, a note of welcome still attached to the bow.

I realize that I have never seen anybody but medical staff in her room.

I realize that the blanket draped over her incubator is not one of the bright, cheery blankets from home, but a plain white one.  Issued by the hospital.

I think about my first day here, when an administrative staff member pulled me aside, asked me if my child was a ward of the state. If I felt for any reason that I couldn’t care for her.  If my home wasn’t safe for her or for me.  Were there problems at home?  Was my husband safe?  Did anybody have any substance abuse issues?  Should they contact a social worker, or protective services?  I was shocked by her questions, thinking about my husband and his gentle, disarming smile.  No, no, of course not, no.  Do you really need to ask these questions?  Really?

Why hasn’t anyone opened that little girl’s welcome gift?

Why does she have a white blanket over her incubator?

Why isn’t her head growing?

Do you really need to ask these questions?

I put my face in Maddie’s hair, breathing deeply.

Today is a good day.

Today is a good day.

A good day.

Today is a good day.

Mother Mary

I don’t know her name.

I see her in the hallway, in the small lunchroom, by the sinks in the Milk Lab where we go to wash and sanitize our breast pump parts.

We have made eye contact. But never spoken. Never even smiled.

I can see she is Mexican.

In my mind, I call her “Maria.”




By the second day at the NICU, my husband and I have fallen into a routine. Every three hours, we do Maddie’s “care.”  The “care” is when we get to fold down the plexiglass sides on her warming table, change her diaper, wash her face (paying special attention to the areas that are being rubbed raw by her ventilator and her feeding tube), move the sensors for her monitors (if you leave them on too long, the adhesive can start to tear her already delicate, papery skin), then feed her. 30 milliliters of breast milk, warmed to body temperature, placed in a large syringe and allowed to drip down into her feeding tube. Maybe tomorrow we’ll get to increase it to 45.  While Maddie eats (Can you call it eating? She doesn’t taste or swallow the milk. It just enters her, penetrates her. It’s sustenance, but a violation at the same time), I pull out the large hospital pump, take off my shirt, and start pumping breast milk. Sometimes I pull the curtain along the back of the room to get some privacy. More often I don’t.  What’s the use?  The doors don’t close.  The windows have no blinds.  The lights only dim.

When I finish pumping, and Maddie finishes eating and is wrapped in clean blankets again, my husband and I usually have a couple of hours of down time.  We spend most of it on our phones.  Friends, relatives, employers, insurance agents. Everyone needs regular updates.  When we finally catch up on the texts and phone calls, we have to deal with the aggressively friendly staff.

Come to the common room for some soda and desserts! 

Just wanted to drop off a flyer for this evening’s scrapbooking class!

We wanted to give your little one this blanket that one of our volunteers knitted.

Would you like to come to our breastfeeding support group?

We need to have a serious discussion about finances.  Can you come to my office and start the application process for Medicaid?

And they all smile. They’re all so nice.  So gentle.  Their gentleness grates on me like sandpaper.  Haggard, unshowered, and only able to manage two hours of restless sleep at a stretch, I snap several times. “Why, exactly, would I want to make a fucking scrapbook of this hell?”

“Oh, someday you might want to look back . . .”

“I don’t want to look back. Ever. I don’t want to make friends. I just want my family to go home.”

(I wasn’t invited to the next night’s class. I think it was for learning how to knit baby hats.)

Under the weight of these routines, the minutes drag while the hours fly by.  Days pass.  We often don’t eat our first meal until 1pm.  Eating and drinking are haphazard affairs.  We forget to do small things, like put on clean socks.  I forget to take my pain medication.  By the third day after my c-section, I just stop altogether, the hassle being worse than the soreness.

Every six hours, I have to take my pumped milk and all of my pump parts down the Milk Lab.  I drop off my milk, where it is processed and frozen for my daughter’s future use, and carefully and meticulously I wash and sanitize my breast pump parts.  Maria is the only other mother I have ever seen doing this.  I know that most of the other children on the floor are on our schedule.  I know that every three hours, they are also having “care,” but Maria and I are the only other mothers who have stuck it out with the breastfeeding.  Most of the other babies are fed formula, if they are taking any food at all.  I don’t judge those mothers who choose the formula.  The constant pumping, the sore nipples (I had weaned my oldest daughter just 10 months before, but my nipples still became painful, cracked, even bloody at times, as the strong hospital pump pulled and tugged on them relentlessly, regularly, every three hours), the trek to the Milk Lab with a bucket full of dirty parts, the trek back with clean ones, neatly lined up on paper towels in pinky flesh colored hospital tubs.  You had to leave the NICU to drop off your milk, so when you wanted to return to your child’s room, you had to stop and scrub in again—three long minutes at a large trough sink, scouring your hands, forearms, fingernails, while a small kitchen timer ticked down.  Any time you punch in your code to leave the NICU, you are required to wash upon your return, even if you only go down the hall.  And this is only the annoyance you have to endure if pumping breast milk is going well.  If you respond to the pump.  If you are able to produce enough for your child.  Maria and I are the success stories.  We can do it.  It’s hard, but at least we’re able to do it.  I overhear another mother in the lunchroom on her phone, quietly, so quietly I could barely make out her sorrow, talking about how her nurse had to put her child on formula after a week of her being able to pump nothing but steam. She tries to sound positive, “At least formula’s free here.”  I think she’s talking to her mother.  Aren’t we all?  I know I am.  Don’t you always talk to your mother in a place like this?



The NICU is full of mothers. Signs for mothers.  Classes for mothers. Services for mothers.  A sign in the lunchroom reads, “Please give seating preference to our NICU mothers.”  Mothers are sent free meals, delivered to the floor.  Brochures circulate, offering massages and laundry services for “our NICU mothers.”  I joke to my husband, “Dads are really getting the shaft here!  You have to sit on the floor and starve!”

He responds seriously, “The mothers are the important ones.”

I look at him.  Suddenly, I want to cry.  “Dads are important, too.”

He is calm, steady, and unflinching.  “Rachel, please. You know that here—especially here—mothers mean more.”

I don’t know why, but I know that he’s right.

By the third day, my husband and I are comfortable enough, curious enough, brave enough to walk the circuit through the entire NICU.  Starting at our room—the last door on the left of a long corridor—we walked straight to the end of the hallway of patient rooms, turned right, walked down another hallway full of open doors, large windows, and dim lights, and turned right again.  One giant trapezoid.  I can’t stop myself from looking in all of the windows.  Most of the rooms are eerily empty.  Babies sleep in incubators that have been covered with colorful blankets.  The NICU recommends that parents bring in blankets from home to cover their children. It protects their still-developing eyes from the lights.  And it’s supposed to look cheery.  A reminder of home.  A happy sight.

They look like sarcophagi.

There are very few parents on the floor.  Again, I don’t blame them.  Most of the parents have children who have been here for weeks, not days.  They have jobs.  Older children.  Homes in the area.  I know the pain they must feel, having to leave their babies behind as they move on with their daily lives, and I feel suddenly grateful. I’m in hell, but so long as my child is here, there is no other place I want to be.  Either I stay here and burn with her, or we all leave together.

The small scattering of parents don’t look up as we pass.

Only Maria makes eye contact.

I walk by her room, and I see her, sitting next to her baby’s incubator. I recognize the blanket that is draped over it.  It’s a receiving blanket with monkeys on it.  It came in a pack of 4.  I received one as a shower gift for my older daughter.  Maria is sitting in the blue recliner, looking out of the window.  Her hands are folded across her belly.  She looks as though she could be calmly taking in the view at a mountain resort on a still morning.  Thoughtful.  We look at each other.

And I feel it.

Every time Maria and I make eye contact, I can feel it.  There is no sadness.  No anger.  No frustration.  Just a resoluteness. She and I look each other fully in the face, without fear or embarrassment.  We take each other in.  And I feel it.  This is a good mother.   I can see it in her face.  Without fear.  Without reproach.  She will do anything for her child.  She will hike through hell.  For as long as it takes.  She’s here, and she’s not leaving.

The next day, around dinner time, my husband and I try to walk to the lunchroom to have dinner.  But the medical staff has a section of hallway closed off.  NICU nurses in their red scrubs, and medical residents in crisp white jackets swarm around outside of a single room.  There is even more medical equipment than usual in the hallway.  Two young nurses stand on either side of the room, shooing people away. My husband and I go the long way around.

We don’t say it, but the entire floor knows what has happened.

A child has died.

I don’t remember eating or talking the rest of that night.  I’m sure I must have.  At some point, I think I hear a wail. A cry.  I hope it’s one of the babies.  I hope it’s my imagination. I don’t think it is.

I started praying that night. I don’t even know if I believe in God.

Please be kind to our NICU mothers.

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Late at night, I walk to the lunchroom to fill my water bottle (a gift for the NICU mothers).  The hallway is still blocked, though only four nurses now stand outside the room.  A curtain has been drawn across the doorway.  I can feel the anger, the frustration, the fear, the sadness coming from the nurses.  I’m afraid to make eye contact with them.

I enter the lunchroom just as Maria is leaving.  Again, our eyes meet, and we know.  Through hell. Through fucking hell. And back again.

I never told her.

I wish I did.

I wish I had to courage to tell her.




You are a good mother.

A great mother.

I hope that she knows.

The Longest Night

The twilight continues with every piece of information you receive.  And you are constantly receiving information.  From the nurses.  From the specialists.  From the residents.  From the pediatricians.  From the financial administrators.  From the smiling, helpful staff.  Always so helpful.  Always smiling.  First, you’ll want to go left.  Then right.  Go down the green hallway.  Green.  You can’t miss it.

Except you do miss it.  You repeat their instructions, muttering them out loud while you try to navigate the labyrinth, but you still manage to walk right past your turn, your landmark. Even backtracking, nothing looks familiar, so you find another smiling staff member.  No, no, the orange hallway.  That will take you to the green hallway.  You can’t miss it.

Eventually, you stop asking directions, preferring aimless wandering to the constant feeling of being lost.

The doctors perform their rounds in the morning.  Six physicians, walking up and down the hallways in a pack, wheeling their laptops on special rolling carts.  They remain in the hallway.   They stand outside your child’s door and discuss her chart, her progress.  If you have found your way back to her room, you get to stand in the doorway with her nurse (one day, having just woken up, I stood in my socks while the well-dressed resident smiled down at me in her polished, sensible shoes) overhearing their updates that are obfuscated by your ignorance.  “Three litres per hour on a ventotherm.” “ Oxygen saturation levels remain normal.”  “Breathing rates still elevated.”  Nasal cannula.  Feeding tubes.  Monitors.  Radiant warmers.  Vents.  Bililights.  And all with their own sound, alert, rhythm, pulse, filling the background with a continuous, deafening chorus.  Something starts to beep persistently, alarmingly.  But nobody moves. Why is nobody moving?  Why do they never seem to respond?  You can barely hear the report the neonatologist gives.   You try to study her observant, patient face.  Try to read her lips as she calmly performs her assessment, gives her update.  Is this good or bad?  Is this progress?  What constitutes progress anyway?  Is the only movement forward a movement out the door?  A movement away from all of this noise?  And where do we go after we walk out of this room?  How do we get home?  Does anyone know the way?



That place we want to go.

You can’t miss it.

Sunday, September 1st: The first ten hours after my emergency C-section are a blur to me.  The anesthetic made me nauseous, and I spent most of the night vomiting into the blue bags the nursing staff were bringing me three and four at a time.  Sometime around 3am, I remembered that I had just gone through major abdominal surgery, and I began to hallucinate about splitting open as I wretched, my insides pulling the stitches and glue apart.  I was splitting down the middle.  I looked down at my incision and saw that it was intact.  But what about the inside?  They went through so many layers.  Maybe you just can’t see it.  Where I’m split.  I’m in two.  I’m torn apart.  Groggy, I asked the nurse if there was any danger.  She assured me that I would be fine—“That’s really strong glue they use!”—the anti-nausea medication was on its way, then she wheeled in the large, powerful hospital breast pump and told me that it was time for me to start pumping colostrum.  Maddie was still in the Special Care Nursery.  She had a ventilator taped over her mouth.  She couldn’t nurse.  If I wanted any chance of breastfeeding, I would have to pump every three hours to encourage my milk to come in.  The nurse suggested that I take a picture of Maddie to look at while I pumped.  “Sometimes it helps.  It makes your milk come in.  Reminds you why you’re doing this.”

The Special Care Nursery was at the far end of the maternity ward, at the end of a long hallway.  That first night, my husband pushed me to Maddie in a wheelchair while I held my catheter bag and IV.  Though the nurses encouraged me to remain seated, the bulky wheelchair wouldn’t let me get close enough to touch her.  I stood up and shuffled over to her, wheeling my IV and catheter behind me.  I was bent over, unable to stand up straight, and I couldn’t seem to convince my legs to swing from my hips smoothly.  They moved in halts and jerks.  I looked and felt like a crone, but the desire to hold my daughter for the first time was stronger than my discomfort.  I limped over and looked down at her.


She was swollen and red.  She felt hot to the touch.  Feverish.  Her umbilical cord had been cut short in preparation for an umbilical catheter (a direct line placed through her umbilical cord and into her artery.  It’s a painless way to draw blood in infants, and a way to directly pump oxygen into her system.  Maddie wound up not needing it, but her cord had been cut down to a flat scab over her bellybutton just in case).  The nurses had removed her hospital-issued blue and pink knit cap, and I could see her thick, black hair, still matted with afterbirth.  She had an IV in her left arm, which had to be immobilized with a soft cast over her wrist.  Her chest moved up and down rapidly.  Her nostrils and lips flexed with each shallow breath.  She was breathing fast.  Too fast.  They told me to look up at the screen above her head.  They pointed to a number.  It was hovering around 95, jumped to 110, then back to 89.  90.  94.  102.  98.  My husband leaned over to whisper.

“That’s her breathing rate.  They told me it should be between 40 and 60 for a newborn.  They’re trying to get it to slow down.”

107.  91.  96.

“There’s fluid in her lungs.  They started her on an antibiotic.  Just in case.  There’s no sign of infection right now, which is good.  They told me it was good.”

97.  100.  104.  104.  99.

As we left the nursery, we passed a little boy in a warmer.  I glanced up at his screen.  49.  51.  50.  50.  45.

I walked back to my room, dragging my IV behind me.  My husband pushed the wheelchair, ready to catch me in case my shaking legs finally failed me.  I tried to stand up straight as I walked, but I couldn’t.  I’m split.  I’m torn in two.  You just can’t see it yet.

In the morning, Maddie’s pediatrician visited.  “We’re all so surprised by this.  Nobody was expecting this.”  She told me something about oxygen percentages.  About oxygen mixtures.  She said Maddie’s lungs were “sticky.”  They were giving her medicine intravenously to flush the fluid from her lungs.  My usually smiling, warm pediatrician was frowning.  She had always looked so youthful and energetic.  Lines had appeared across her forehead.  I realized I had never seen her in surgical scrubs before.  Her thick hair was pulled back.  She looked paler than I remembered.  Paler than her Hispanic lineage.  “I have to stop at the office this morning for one appointment, then I’m coming right back here.  I won’t leave her.  I’m going to be with Maddie all day, okay?  She is my priority.”

I nodded.  The stitches have failed.  I’m split.  I’m torn.


“This is going to be the best for Maddie.”

I think we were nodding.  I think we were understanding.  I don’t think I was crying.  Not yet.  I know that my husband was standing next to me.  I know that I was sitting on a hospital bed in a well-lit maternity ward, on a bright Sunday in late summer.  But everything was dark.  I was focusing on the pediatrician’s face.  I had to.  Everything else had gone black.  If I stopped looking at her, if I lost focus for an instant, I knew that the blackness would swallow everything.  I knew the dark would take over.  So I stared at her face.  Yes, it was pale.  Paler than usual.

“I have to be able to admit when a patient’s needs are out of my realm of care.  And hers are.  I can’t get her breathing under control.  If we try to take the vent away, she won’t have the energy to breathe on her own.  She needs to be with experts.  With specialists.  This is going to be the best for Maddie.  I promise.”

The pediatrician had called in a team from Riley Children’s Hospital in Indianapolis.  They would be here within the hour.  Maddie was going to be placed in an incubator—boxed up—and sent by helicopter to the NICU.  A pediatric respiratory nurse was coming as well.  She was going to quickly assess Maddie, prepare her to be air-lifted, make sure that she was stable enough for the transport, then take her away.  Away from me.  Away from us.  Maddie would be sent off on a seventeen-minute helicopter ride to a facility that was an hour drive away.

My husband and his mother immediately left.  Because Maddie’s delivery was an emergency, he didn’t have any clothes with him.  He ran to our house and quickly packed a bag for himself, then the two of them drove to Indy, fast, in the hopes of meeting Maddie there.  I was still recovering from the anesthetic, still being monitored for any signs of complications or infections.  I had to stay behind.  Alone.  In the maternity ward.  My husband balked at the thought of leaving me, but I wouldn’t let him stay.  I couldn’t endure the thought of her arriving at the NICU without someone, without one of us, without her family.  She had to know, even if she couldn’t open her eyes, that we were with her.

It hadn’t been twenty hours since I had delivered her, and I had never seen her eyes, had never held her.

After they left, I hobbled down to the Special Care Nursery to wait for the team from Riley’s.  I ran my hand through her dark, dark hair, and watched her chest move fast—too fast—up and down as she lay on the warming table.  She was panting with shallow, rapid breaths.  She was still hot to the touch, her body overworked just from the effort of breathing.  Don’t stop breathing.  Don’t stop. Just slow down a little.  Breathe, Maddie.  Breathe.  Breathe.  She was swollen and red, and every now and again her brow would furrow and she would shudder, like a person in a lucid dream trying to wake up, trying to respond to the voices that she could hear but couldn’t answer.  I had to believe that, even in her stupor, even with the ventilator hissing, and the monitors beeping and wailing and alerting, even with my blood pumping so loudly I was certain the whole ward was being deafened by it, that she could hear me.  “I love you.  Mommy loves you.”  I said it over and over again.

When the team from Riley’s showed up, it was as though the Marines had arrived.  Three specialists, all in matching black flight suits, wheeling clean, complicated machinery in front of them.  They were confident, efficient, but gentle.  They sent me back to my room, the respiratory nurse promising that she was going to bring Maddie to me once they got her into the mobile incubator.  While I waited, I filled out some paperwork, and told the nurse my cell number.  She assured me that she was going to call me, personally, the second they landed, and that she was going to stay with Maddie on the ground as well.  “I don’t have any other flights scheduled for tonight.  I’ll be with her.”  The nurse looked at Maddie’s chest x-rays, and quickly assessed her condition. They increased the pressure in her ventilator, forcing more air into her lungs, helping to open them.  The entire hospital staff seemed relieved that they had arrived.  The nurses in the Special Care Nursery looked thankful that someone was given them firm, sure orders, that someone seemed to have a plan.  My pediatrician respectfully stepped into the background, the lines never leaving her face.

They brought Maddie into my room, wedging the large, plexiglass incubator between my bed and the wall, trying to get her as close to me as possible.  One of the men in the flight suits (they never spoke to me.  Only the respiratory nurse ever said a word), opened the small, round porthole on the side, and let me put my hand inside to touch her.  The skin on her fingers and arms was wrinkled and soft, loose.  Her arms and legs were too skinny.  They didn’t have time in the womb to store up the fat needed to fill her out.  Even though she was puffy and swollen, I could feel all of her small, bird-like bones as I reached in and took a hold of her hand.  Her right hand.  Her left was still bandaged in the cast used to hold her IV in place.  The nurse was again assuring me that she’d call immediately.  I think she said that Maddie really did look good, or at least that the nurse had seen far worse.  Every part of me ached to hold Maddie, to climb inside the incubator next to her, to shield her with my body, to warm her with my hands, to breathe for her too.  If they asked me to, I would breathe for her for the rest of her life.  I would give every single breath for her.  Her small, delicate fingers wrapped around mine, and gripped me tight.

Then, they wheeled her away.  It was 4:30pm on Sunday, September 1st.

I began to sob.

I’m split.  I’m torn.


The nurses tried their best to keep me entertained, or at least busy, that whole, long night.  They brought me a tray of food.  Meatloaf, I think.  I remember there were mashed potatoes.  I hadn’t eaten all day.  This was my first meal since having surgery.  I ate the food, not really tasting it.  I remember thinking it was strange that I didn’t feel hungry, but I ate it all anyway.  The nurses reminded me to “keep pumping!” in voices that sounded far too chipper.  I did.  I even dutifully washed and sanitized my pumping parts between every session, killing the time by running hot water over everything.  They brought me toiletries so I could have a shower.  They removed my IV and catheter, and checked on me every hour.  They told me that I would be discharged early the next morning, smiling, “You’ll have one of the shortest stays ever after a c-section!  That’s so great!”  They asked repeatedly if I wanted anything for the pain.  I didn’t know which pain they meant.  So I just said no.

The nurses had me fill out my discharge paperwork that evening.  They wanted to make sure that all I had to do in the morning was get the doctor’s approval and leave.  While signing the papers, someone from the Special Care Nursery appeared at the door.  She was hesitant.  She had Maddie’s ankle bracelet in her hand.  “I didn’t know if you wanted to keep this.  A lot of moms want to keep it for their scrapbooks and baby books.”  She handed it to me.  She had been able to slip it off Maddie’s too-thin foot without cutting it.  It was complete, but empty.  It froze me.  I held the small bracelet in my hand, trying to keep it warm, trying to keep it feeling alive and still connected to a hot, panting little body.  I rubbed my hands together, willing my nerves to remember the feeling of her soft, soft, loose skin, her bony grip. My hands shook as I held the bracelet.  I don’t remember asking them all to leave—I don’t remember being able to—but soon I was alone in my room, crying, sobbing, panting.  My breath came in fits and starts.  I couldn’t catch it. Couldn’t catch my breath.  I couldn’t fill my lungs.  I stared down at the bracelet. “I love you.  Mommy loves you.”

I said it over and over.


Eventually, the respiratory nurse called to let me know that Maddie was set up in a private room in the NICU, and that she had tolerated the helicopter ride well.  My husband also called, his voice hopeful.  “She looks so good.  Really.  She looks better already. I’m serious, baby. She looks so good.  They already have her looking better.”  I could tell by his voice that he wasn’t placating me.  And I was happy that he was there, along with his mother, and my parents, who stopped in Indy on their way down to see us.  Three of her grandparents were with her (my father-in-law was watching our older daughter), and her father.  That’s what I wanted for her.  To be overwhelmed with love.  To be full to the point of bursting with care and concern.  I turned on the television in my room, and watched HGTV until regular programming switched over to infomercials sometime around 4am.  By 7, I was showered, packed, wearing my street clothes, and seated in the rocking chair in my room, waiting to be discharged.  I was in the hospital 32 hours total, and when my husband arrived at 7:30, we didn’t even stop to pick up a change of clothes.  By 9am, I was once again running my hands through Maddie’s dark, dark hair, still matted with afterbirth.

“House (Ar)rest”

Having a child in the NICU is like living in perpetual twilight.  The windowless rooms.  The heavy curtain dividers.  The lights in your child’s room—dimmed for optimal “family rest”—that make you blink violently when you walk out into the bright hallway.  The nurses, always looking hurried, yet trained to be silent even as they quickly thud past in their thick-soled black shoes, trained to not disturb the sleeping, the resting, the grieving, the hopeful.  The continuous, 24-hour schedule, skewing any sense of time you may have been able to retain in the artificial environment.  The clocks that dutifully tell you times that mean nothing.  Is it two in the morning?  Or is it afternoon? What does it mean that the clock reads 2?  What does it matter?  Either way, it’s time for another feeding.  Another tube inserted into her.  Another moment, another minute, when you get to fold down the plexiglass divider and touch her.


Thursday, August 14th: I was clutching my husband’s arm, my eyes squeezed shut, as the pressure steadily mounted and peaked.  He was lying next to me, calm but alert, one eye on his phone, timing the contraction.

“Don’t forget to breathe, baby.”

His low, still voice reminded me that I was, indeed, holding my breath.  I slowly exhaled and opened my eyes as the pain subsided.  One minute long.  Twenty minutes after the last one.

“She’s coming.  She’s coming out of me.  I can feel it.  This isn’t normal.  I can feel her head pushing against me.  She’s coming.”

On Saturday I would be 35 weeks pregnant (I believed, though I would later learn that my calculations were off a day).  For the last two nights I had been experiencing contractions that were increasingly regular and painful.  I was being woken up throughout the night from the pain.  I tried to “drink a glass of water and lay down” (the usual advice for stopping preterm contractions), but it didn’t seem to be very effective.  I was told that the contractions were likely “false” labor, Braxton Hicks contractions, that helped to prepare my uterus for the task of childbirth, but didn’t actively advance labor, didn’t affect my cervix.  But these contractions didn’t feel like a general tightening in my midsection.  It felt like a downward push, hard, and insistent, and slowly rhythmic.

The next morning I called my OB, and was told to come to the office right away.  After a quick exam, it was easy to see that I wasn’t having “false” labor, or “unproductive” contractions.  I was in pre-term labor, 2 centimeters dilated, 70% effaced, and contracting every 15 minutes.  My OB put me on Procardia. (A blood pressure medication that some studies have shown helps to slow down contractions, though its efficacy for pre-term labor has really only been recorded for the first 24-72 hours after starting it.  It buys you a couple of days.  But, luckily, I was far enough along that all we really needed was a couple of days.)  Then he told me, “Your job for the weekend is to sit on your couch and time your contractions.”

“Like bed rest?”

He balked.  “I’m not going to tell you you can’t do things.  I’m not going to put you on bed rest.  Let’s call it couch rest.  House rest.  Just, don’t leave your house.  And don’t do much while you’re in it.”

“So, activity-wise…?”

“As close to nothing as you can manage.”

“For how long?”

“For as long as it takes.”

For two weeks, I slowly fused into my couch.  I dropped my daughter off with her grandparents.  I downloaded a contraction timing app to my tablet.  I ate everything out of a microwave.  I obsessed about every twitch, flicker, and tightening in my belly.  I watched my house succumb to the rapid entropy that comes when you have both a husband who works too many hours and a toddler whose idea of “helping” usually includes pulling all of the Kleenexes out of the box while laughing maniacally.  I watched way too many hours of “Criminal Minds” and “Law and Order” (because apparently marathons of violent TV dramas are the only things on in the middle of the day when you have basic cable. Who knew?).  I did nothing, except slowly, slowly, agonizingly slowly went insane.

I took the Procardia for five days.  After two, my “breakthrough” contractions had ramped up enough that the on-call physician told me to double my dose.  After two more days, I developed an allergy to the medication, and had to stop taking it immediately.  Without any medicinal intervention keeping my uterus from contracting, my “house rest” had morphed into house arrest.  I was told to stay hydrated, and keep my feet elevated.  No laundry.  No picking up my daughter.  No walking to the park.  No nesting.  I sat on my couch, thirty feet away from my newborn’s incomplete nursery, and was adamantly forbidden from working on it.

I was miserable.

Even though I kept telling myself that I was lucky (we had made it to 34 weeks with no complications, and if my daughter had been born at this point, the chances of her having long-term problems from being born preterm would be truly miniscule).  Even though I knew that it was temporary (I only had to wait until 37 weeks to be considered truly “full term” and therefore out of danger).  Even though I kept telling myself to be thankful for the outpouring of help I received (My good friends sent me flowers.  My parents drove 500 miles to be with me.  My sister visited from Chicago. My daughter essentially lived with her grandparents, enjoying way too much junk food, way too few rules, and bedtimes that were way too late, for almost the entire time.  I missed her until I ached, but I knew that she was happier being with people who could get down on the floor with her, instead of trapped in the living room with her mother, watching Cars and Up again).  In spite of knowing all of these things, I found myself crumbling every day.  Two o’clock would roll around, and I would sob, knowing that I had already sat like stagnant pond water for the majority of the day, but also knowing that I still had hours—long, long hours—before my husband would come home, before I could move off the couch and into the passenger seat of our minivan and enjoy fifteen minutes of bliss and freedom as he drove us to a local fast food restaurant for dinner.  I watched the clock, timed my contractions, played hundreds of hands of solitaire, and sobbed.

Sunday, August 25th-Monday, August 26th: I was 36 weeks pregnant.  I was 4 centimeters dilated.  Once again, I grabbed my husband’s arm in bed as he timed my contractions. Every 10 minutes.  I was certain that I was going to be having my baby.  “It’s happening.  It’s really happening.”  We dropped our sleeping daughter off with my mother-in-law, and drove to the hospital, getting there around eleven at night.

The nurses hooked me up to the monitors.  We all watched the needle swing wildly and regularly, showing my contractions.  I was effaced.  My baby had dropped.  One of the nurses, after checking me, exclaimed, “Your cervix is READY for birth!”  I was uncomfortable, but smiling.  It was over.  I was done.  I would no longer have to sit in misery.  I was going to have my baby.  She was a little early, but it’s okay.  She’d be fine.  She was measuring big, her heart rate looked great, and, being a girl, the odds of her having problems would be low.  The nursery wasn’t finished.  The laundry wasn’t done.  Nothing was ready.  But it didn’t matter.  She would be here.  Finally.  I breathed more easily, knowing that it was all over.

Then, the OB made the decision to stop my labor.  It was her medical opinion that we wait.  I was just 36 weeks.  It was cutting it too close.  She confessed to being overly cautious on such matters, but told me that being conservative would be a good thing for my baby.  Really.  I was given two doses of terbutaline to stop my contractions, spent 9 hours at the hospital, slept 20 minutes, and was sent back home early enough for my husband to go back to work after just a few hours’ nap.  I was left alone, pregnant, and in labor.  Again.

I couldn’t believe it.  I was told that after 36 weeks my labor would be allowed to progress.  That it was standard procedure to allow a woman that far along to give birth.  But I was still pregnant.  Still sitting on the couch.  Still crying at 2pm after realizing that I may have to deal with an entire month more of labor.  Still guilty for wanting my baby to arrive, not for her sake, but for mine.  I was being a horrible mother.  Selfish and whiny, I just wanted my discomfort to end, even though the possibility that my unborn child would have complications was very real.  I didn’t care.  I wanted my baby.  For me.  I wanted to feel better.  I wanted it to end.  I was angry at the OB.  I was angry at my body, which didn’t seem capable of holding on to her any longer.  I was even angry at my child, not because it was her fault, but because I knew that I couldn’t blame her.  I was angry at her, and I hated myself for being angry at her.  Because I knew that I had to sacrifice my comfort for her safety.  Because I knew that I’d always have to sacrifice my comfort for her safety.  Because it wasn’t fair.

So I cried.

Saturday, August 31st: I believed that I had made it.  According to my calculations, I was 37 weeks.  Full term.  Out of danger.  If my preterm labor ramped up again, my OB would not try to stop it.  I was freed from house arrest.

To celebrate, my husband and I decided to wander around the Fourth Street Festival, an art fair held every Labor Day Weekend in our hometown.  I was going to look at the handmade art, enjoy some people watching, maybe even have an ice cream cone.  I wasn’t going to be alone anymore.  After two weeks on my couch, it would be Heaven.

It was brutally hot.  We stopped and looked at the booths set up by local artisans and craftsmen, chatted with a few of them whose work caught our eye, and tried to turn our faces to the hot breeze that worked its way lazily down the street in between the crowds of people.  We spent most of the afternoon sitting under a tent, listening to Americana, sipping lemonade sold by the high school orchestra.  I began to really notice my labor. Whenever I had another painful contraction, I would grip my husband’s arm.  I seemed to be clutching him every song.

As we walked back to the car, I had to stop frequently and wait through another minute-long contraction.

“These are getting closer together.”  Once again, his voice was calm, but he was watching me intensely.

“No, no,” I gasped.  “It’s just the heat.”  Suddenly, I was aware that my newly acquired freedom was at risk.  It was my first day out of the house in weeks.  It might turn out to be my last.

We went back to my mother-in-law’s house to pick up our daughter.  There, in the cool of the air conditioning, my husband quietly timed my contractions while we sat around and chatted, trying to ignore the elephant of my impending delivery.  Every five minutes.  I somehow convinced him to take me home.  Somehow decided that my labor would stop if I was in my own bed, resting and watching cartoons with my daughter.  An hour later, they were four minutes apart.  I called my OB.

“Rachel, are you in labor?”

Gasping, “Yeah.  Yes.  I’m pretty sure I am.”

“Then get here.  Now.”

At 7:23 my OB checked my cervix.  “You’re 6 centimeters dilated.  Your baby is coming whether we do anything or not.  Within the half-hour, you will be having a c-section.  Okay?”

Joy, nerves, excitement, fear.  I had no time to truly feel any of them.  I called my family.  Everyone was at a barbeque at my aunt’s house.  They immediately started laughing and making guesses about the baby’s weight and the time of birth.  They started a friendly bet around the table.  I heard their overlapping conversations, their joy, as chaos and noise.  I was smiling and laughing.  I was still smiling and laughing, even when I was being wheeled, alone, into the OR.  I was still smiling and laughing, even when I started to tremble, shaking uncontrollably.  Am I cold?  I must be cold.  Maybe I should ask for a blanket. The nurses joked and smiled at me as they wrapped me in warmed blankets and tested my belly for numbness.  My husband came in, then, wearing blue scrubs.  I was still trembling.  Still smiling and laughing.  It was 8pm.


Ultimately the c-section was a wonderful experience.  It was fast, efficient, and without any complications.  I felt nothing but a slight tugging sensation, then I heard the roar of congratulations as the nursing staff and my OB welcomed my little girl into the world.  My husband, smiling behind his mask, was holding her in a tiny bundle.  It was 8:33pm.  She was born at 36 weeks, 6 days.  I had been one day off in my calculations.  She was the oldest a “premature” baby can be, though her size belied her early delivery.  6 pounds, 15 ounces.  We all laughed.  The OB joked, “If she waited three more weeks, she would’ve been HUGE!”  My husband placed her face next to mine, and I began to cry as I kissed her, the tears rolling back into my ears.  She was red and swollen, puffy from the strain of the birth, but I could see how she looked like her sister, her father.  Her eyes were closed, and her lips were pursed.  A frown was working its way across her forehead.

And she was quiet.

She wasn’t crying.  It wasn’t a cry.  More of a grunt.  A gasp.  One of the nurses appeared, hovering over my head and haloed in the bright spotlights above me.  “Rachel, she seems to be having a little trouble breathing.  We’re just going to send her to the special care nursery.  Just to get her some help.  She just needs a little help.”

I couldn’t look away from her, from my daughter.  I couldn’t stop kissing her.  My husband was looking up at the nurse.  Quiet and calm as always, but alert.  I didn’t notice him tensing up.  I was looking at my daughter’s chipmunk cheeks. Just a little help?  Just a little? I nodded.  “Okay.  Yeah, I understand.”

The nurse looked kind, but she wasn’t smiling and laughing anymore.  “What’s her name?”

“Madeline.  Madeline Louise.  Maddie.”

“You’ll be able to see Maddie soon, okay?  Daddy’s going to take Maddie the whole way.  He’ll be with her the whole time, okay?”  She looked down, “Maddie, give Mommy a kiss.”  The nurse put her hand on my husband’s arm, and he stood up, pulling Maddie away from me.

I twisted my head around, trying to watch her from where I was strapped to the operating table.  The last thing that I remember was my husband’s shoulder, in blue scrubs, hunched over our new daughter, as he turned away from me and walked out the door.